Pushing it. Adding more detail.

So ok, the last version quite a bit to be desired. So I went in and tried to flesh it out some more. The direction I got was that the opening poses were much too cliche' and that there should probably be more pushing and a resolution to the pushing in there.

Well, I got as much of that as I could done this week, which was hard, because we went out of town for half the week. But even though I'm a bit behind, I think I'm getting there...

Click on the image to the right to see the second week blocking.