Week 2 Submission
Additional Note:
Ok, so I had my crit with Warren, and I was really happy to hear I didn't totally blow this assignment out my backside. Truth be told, he seemed to enjoy it, and had some small tweaks, but overall, he seemed happy with it! Yay for me! There were tweaks, as I mentioned:
Ok, so I had my crit with Warren, and I was really happy to hear I didn't totally blow this assignment out my backside. Truth be told, he seemed to enjoy it, and had some small tweaks, but overall, he seemed happy with it! Yay for me! There were tweaks, as I mentioned:
- He liked the structure elements under the sketches, I should keep do that as much as possible.
- Liked that I added the silouette as well as the original sketch.
- He thought the back shoulder could have been pushed up a little more
- He thought the forward arm and leg made a similar shape, and it didn't look as interesting. I might be able to open up that negative space more by opening up the forward arm, straightening a little and pushing it up slightly.
- Noticed the back arm has a bend and my arm doesnot show abend, I might be able to increase the feeling of tension by adding more of a backward bend, just a little.
- Conclusion: Always push the pose to make interesting, consider negative space and what shapes they're making graphically.
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